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Cold emailing is one of the best ways to connect with potential customers.
But most outreach ends up in the trash folder, never to be seen again.
If your emails aren’t getting responses, simple fixes can dramatically improve your open and response rates.
In this newsletter, we’ll share the top reasons your emails are being ignored and proven ways to fix them.
With these copywriting tips, you can craft compelling cold emails that convert.
Let’s dive in…
1. Your subject line is too salesy or boring
A subject line is the first impression your email makes.
But most sound too salesy or dull.
They end up overlooked in a crowded inbox.
Instead, use curiosity triggers.
Ask questions or promise value about their needs.
This pulls them in to open and learn more.
“Quick question about [company]”
“Tip to improve [relevant metric]”
This makes your email stand out and gets it opened.
2. You didn’t personalize the message
Generic mass emails won’t connect.
But personal details show you care.
Include their name, company info, and specific needs.
This makes your message laser-focused for them.
Studies show personalized emails deliver 6x higher transaction rates.
3. No clear value is stated
Your prospect wants to know:
“What’s in it for me?”
Quickly explain how you can help them.
Share stats and proof to back up your claims.
Vague, weak value won’t motivate action.
Be specific on the outcomes you deliver.
4. Big blocks of text are hard to read
Dense paragraphs are skipped.
Bullets, short sentences, and bold headings provide clarity.
Get to the point fast.
Cover the key details first before elaborating.
This makes your email easy to scan and digest.
More of your message will be consumed.
5. You didn’t guide them to take action
Close with a clear CTA like,
“Reply to schedule a quick call.”
Tell them exactly what you want them to do next.
Don’t just end your email without a call to action.
Make it effortless for them to engage further.
Making these fixes can get more opens and responses from your cold outreach.
Test different subject lines, personalization tactics, value props, formats, and calls-to-action
to see what resonates best with your prospects.
With some refinement, your cold emails can become a lead-gen machine.
See you next week,
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